I hate old school...Its so annoying. Anyway, thats pretty nice, but the part that comes off the car and goes on the road messes up the depth. The text could use some work, but I love the sparklies. You have some nice depth in there, other than pieces on the side of the car. Overall nice signature.
K that looks alot better. However may I suggest blurring the effect on the side of the car slightly? Just the end on it, because thats where you started blurring the car and it would help depth. I don't like the monotoneness, and the smudging on the head looks really weird on the right side. The hand looks odd as well.Text is kinda meh, could use some work. Put it into the post not as a quote next time please. Now, The lighting seems odd to me, it could use some dark spots rather than just light ones. Why is the top of the border lighter than the bottom? That looks odd. Other wise, the text is okay, well the gift, but still could use some repositioning and recoloring on all fronts. The smudging is good, but it lacks flow and depth. I don't like the randomish flowers on the sides. With out looking at the sides, its a okay sig. The sides really bring t his one down. Maybe try putting in a bg stock or something? The text is good, I wouldn't suggest changing it. However, that might just be me. Good flow, other than the sides. scanlines really shouldn't be other the bubbles, they look horrible of the bubbles, although, the bubbles look kinda bad too. You should set them to screen or lighten only. The text should be moved down to the shoulder. The scanlines should just go jump of a cliff.