Clithrophobia

Discussion in 'Reach Competitive Maps' started by ScareCrow813, Jun 29, 2011.

  1. ScareCrow813

    ScareCrow813 Forerunner

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    This is the newest addition to the epic phobia series. This map has two bases facing opposite each other with long hallways on either side and top room with an energy sword and a bottom room with a shotgun. This map is somewhat inspired by a halo Ce but i can't remember the name. It is "rat" something. I know the file on my file share is different, bungie.net did not like the name Clithrophobia. Please comment and tell me if i need to fix anything.

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    #1 ScareCrow813, Jun 29, 2011
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  2. Frozenlynx

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    Lol...this map's name has a dirty word in it.

    Anyhow...I'm liking the way you used the 3-story building in a creative way, but from these pictures I'm skeptical about this map. The lines of sight in the 4th picture down look a little iffy; there doesn't look like much cover around the sides of the 3-story building and the tall tower. The rock room looks kinda ugly because of the repetition of the rock patterns and I'm hesitant about all those windows a couple pictures above it in terms of frame-rate. I'm not a huge fan of the water's implementation either...it just looks poorly integrated and boring.

    The pictures you've used make it difficult to grasp a feeling for the layout, which may be because of the fact that they're not ordered in a way that leads you through each section. It took me a minute to figure out where the rock room's entrance was, and I'm still wondering if there's another way in there. Where is that room with all the glass windows located? Where do the ramps in front of it go and what's that area behind it? I'm also curious about the hole with the shield door and where that goes. I know it's easy to say, "Just download it and look around," but these pictures just don't make me want to unfortunately. To put it bluntly, it looks as if this map very rushed and lacks polish.
     
  3. ScareCrow813

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    Yeah if had a lot more money this map would be so much better but when i finished putting the walls and roofs on it i only had about $900 left and i still needed to put weapons and health stations.
     
  4. Frozenlynx

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    Going back and consolidating pieces and finding more efficient ways to obtain the results you want is a natural part of forging. Look for decorative pieces that aren't necessary to the overall aesthetic. Maybe remove that tall tower and replace it with a more original structure. It would be easy to do so with less than the $150 that building piece is costing you.
     
  5. ScareCrow813

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    yeah i just totally give up on this map, beacuse it did not turn out out it was planned to be. and the idea was not implemented very good. but thank you for the helpful ideas.
     

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