Looks cool. I thikn that the girl infront should also be in sepia but keep the red flare and the red reflection. Also the person in the background seens a little sqaushed and thin. But apart from all that it looks nice.
The text looks like it says hentai. Also, get rid of the kid, if you want to make it look like the balls, do some rough outlines on the car and other objects in flash. Otherwise good.