Okay, I'll try to be a little more thorough for you because everyone else is being a little harsh and vague. First of all, you should probably include more than one image. It is hard to get a feel for the map's structure, aesthetics, etc. with one image. Also, you should give a more thorough description of the map; not just the weapon list. From what I can see, the map looks symmetrical and your forging looks somewhat smooth. There is way too much open space and not enough cover from what I can see. Try adding more structures to your map and eliminate some lines of visibility. These guys are right, there are no needlers or swords in MLG so this may be a better map for the "competitive" section. Take another stab at this map or start a new one all together. Spend more time polishing it and making it look nice but don't stray too far from your originally intended functionality.
This map is about the farthest thing from MLG i've ever seen, and I can tell just from that picture. No true lines of sight, no cover, obvious that if it was ever going to be played that it would have instant spawn killing problems, no real structures, no AA's on map, etc. I can see that this only took you about 20 minutes to make. Put some real effort into your map before posting on Forgehub. I've seen maps that are unpostable to Forgehub that look 100x better than this. Take atleast 12 hours working on your map before posting. 0/5