This pic looks really cool. The light in the back ground is a little bit over-the-top. Maybe if you would go back and slightly back up (or slide forward) it would lessen the glare. This is a really good pic though, but may I also suggest putting a little more in text? It's a picture, so you can't put to much, but a little bit would be better.
That looks pretty cool, I like how the broken glass looks on the front of the hog. The whole yellow side part looks nice too and how they all have low shields. The angle is but another cool part to this shot. Nice job!