Bumblebee - Transformers *SOTW*

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  1. HellsRequiemAMX

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    Uhm... CnC, please and thanks, and give atleast a 1 paragraph CnC.


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    Version Two:
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  2. Frag Man

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    It was hard to tell what the focal was at first, but good signature none the less.
     
  3. Laxer

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    Great like usual. Good text and nice flow.
     
  4. HellsRequiemAMX

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    Thanks, it was probably the best stock I could find out there, atleast where I was searching (for Bumblebee).

    Thanks Laxer!
     
  5. SAVExTHExWHALES

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    First off, your focal is to the right of the text. Try to fix that. Really good text like always. Too bright in the background. I see a little depth but not much. I love your subtle effects. Your lighting is a bit out of control though. Maybe go without a border on this one too. Good flow.

    I like it a lot.
     
  6. HellsRequiemAMX

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    Truly constructive, thanks Whales, fixing for a version two at the moment, will update shortly!
     
  7. LOCK.xcf

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    Amazing! I love the colors, great flow, but I'm not too crazy about the border. The text is great BTW.
     
  8. HellsRequiemAMX

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    Thanks Lock, I am updating with a new version at the moment, I might put new text or not, I will see how I am feeling, seeing that I got quite positive feedback on this version's text.
     
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    I just love the way it fits into the rest of the sig and render/stock. Great placement and color, god i need to learn how to use text like that.
     
  10. HellsRequiemAMX

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    Look for sweet spots, that's what I do, works most the time, and after you find the sweet spot, there are colours you need to take into hand, and so on.


    *VERSION TWO IS UP*

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  11. TKS x MoNsTeR x

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    I love the text.
    Great effects.
    I'm starting to grow fond of your GFXs HR.
     

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