Seriously, you've done this in 2 threads now, you have to embed the screen shots. There should be a guide somewhere. EDIT: Alright, now that the pictures up, it looks pretty cool, nothing too special though. I like how the sniper gets big towards the screen.
This has been done too much. It isn't original at all. And you can see the blue lights. It was executed poorly. Try making it so that you can't see the blue lights. It would be a little better.