Blue- SOTW entry

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  1. DC

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    This is my first SOTW entry, so tell me how i did.

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  2. Lord Terrax XII

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    Hmmmm.... Not terrible but has absolutely no flow. The C4d in the back goes all over the place and doesn't make sense. The smudging is good for what it is but the edges are too harsh. Also the light in the back looks nice but where you dodged it (or set to color dodge... Doesn't matter) It has some lines going on the focal that really shouldn't be there... Idk. Not great but not your worst.


    6/10.... <= With benefit of the doubt.
     
  3. Laxer

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    Overall it looks good. But the car is floating lol
     
  4. Lord Terrax XII

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    The front of the car is a tad pixely also... I would suggest cropping the left side to just in front of the car and some on top and bottom...

    Edit: Here...
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    Notice how the parts that I mentioned in my first review that were distracting the flow were just easily cropped out and you no longer have a floating car. Also the smoky smudging doesn't just end.

    *Feel free to use if u want.
     
    #4 Lord Terrax XII, May 20, 2009
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  5. DC

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    that looks better... i geuss i can use it since it's a simple crop. lol.
     
  6. Frag Man

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    Put a reflection of the car below the car.

    Oh wait. Make it stronger though.
     

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