So this is something I've created for a sig. Pretty much i would like some help on making it better. I was going towards having the girl in an old photograph on some wood. comments?
You should get some different wood so the grain of it matches her hair better. Begin serious The break in the middle seems more fitting for a transition between two images rather than in the middle, and having the focal point and all color on one side seems odd.
There seems to be 3 focals: the girl's face, the arrow-shaped line, and the text. I've had a lot of trouble with text and focals too. Usually you put the text close to the focal. I like the idea a lot though and you should keep working with it