You're getting better. Text is still bad, but at least they're beginning to actually move forward. Did you try anything from the tutorials people suggested?
You really have to work on your text. If you don't feel like it fits, and works well with the image, then it is likely not right. One thing I have been noticing in your signatures is you leave your renders pristine and unchanged. This would be fine of you had a similar pristine background, but as is they tend not to blend as well. I am not speaking of this image in particular, but it does still apply. And just placing a C4D in front of the render doesn't qualify as changing it. I strongly advise looking at tutorials. Find a tutorial that makes a good looking sig, then try it. Tutorials are great ways to learn.