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   Duckyz Ancient

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   this is my 1st sig in about 2 months
   
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   please crit* i need the help
   
   and i know the render background hasnt been deleted properly
   EDIT: please give link for better text

    

   #1 Duckyz, Oct 9, 2009

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   SmokinWaffle Ancient

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   The text doesn't go with it at all, and it seems a bit dark also to me.

    

   #2 SmokinWaffle, Oct 9, 2009
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   Duckyz Ancient

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   V3
   

    

   #3 Duckyz, Oct 9, 2009
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   loshon Ancient

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   Ehh, try to make the text interact with the focal more, and add some depth, and a lightsource.

    

   #4 loshon, Oct 9, 2009

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