First off, The picture in the spoiler doesn't work. Secondly, You need to say what kind of map this is, (Competitive, Casual, Race, Asthetic, Mini game.) because when maps are in the sidebar of the home page, It doesn't say, and most people don't look at the URL to see what kind of map it is. Now from what I see in the pictures you provided, You seem very talented and have a lot of potential. If you Geo/Ghost merged the whole map a little more, It would look more clean and can make the map better all around.
Umm, what exactly is it? A loading bay, or a big stone monster? From the pics I cant tell. But I can tell the forging is good. Maybe add some more pics and a better description.
only the strong can thrive on forgehub... if you cant take constructive criticism then this place isnt for you .