Ok I attempt to work from a stock for the first time and this is what i came up with. Any Suggestions? I'll resize later
It looks like the stock was placed, and the entire right side was purplefied while the left was left virtually the same. Also, the main border around the whole sig shouldnt be so thick imo... The little almost border like lines in the sig dont work for me, and the text is bad. On a final note, lack of flow, only some depth, slightly unreadable text, plain and unmatching purple right side and lack of anything too eyecatching. :/ PS: Sorry if this came off as harsh. As for suggestions... obviously shrink it lol, as you said you would, -redo the right side... idk what, add a C4D, or something like brushes or a filter effect there. It looks too plain, and the fact it is just purple wavy-ness throws it off. -Get flow going... add a light source maybe, that helps. -Thinner border Thats all I can say for now... hope this helps and doesn't come off as offensive XD
Alright, i am not too big with this kind of stuff, and I still consider myself a beginner. I dont think that your advice is too harsh, i take it the right way and I will work on it. Thanks for the review
Right Side is generally bland and you need some blurring or smudging or something on the far left. Also some downsizing and a lot of cropping would help.