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  1. Knight Kninja

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    i feel good about my work recently.. not bad for just coming back. i used a light-leak style effect for this one.
     
  2. RaBBiiTTT

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    I'm not really liking those three green circles around her, especially the bold one. The colors and effects use are good, but the text just seems a little bit too far from the focal.

    The border doesn't really do the signature much good.
     
  3. Kidbomber

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    I hope you rember about having some emotion in your work! ;)

    Anyway most of what bothers me was already said by Rabbitt, however one thing about teh boarder is if it 'blends to much on the top or the bottom (like you have the top right the boarder blends in alot while the bottom its more apparent). Try using a no boader , really think that would work well.

    edit: Oh and the clippling mask to the right with her arm is also distracting. :/
     
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  4. Frag Man

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    Floating arm is interesting. In the wrong way.
     
  5. R0FLninja

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    Colors: :D
    BG: :D
    Floating arm: :|
    Green Circle :/
     
  6. Knight Kninja

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    haha k thanks guys. and as for the emotion KB, yes, it makes my work so much stronger
     
  7. Frag Man

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    Do too much emotion, and you're going to regret not making it 100% yours.
     

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