Ah-Mah-Gahd-It's-A-Shocker Cropped, No text. Cropped, Text. TEXT ADVICE PLZ. EDIT : Personally, I like No Text better. CnC normally is also appreciated. Original : Spoiler
The effects (specifically the thin lightning) are over-sharpened. Slanting text with such a bold stroke? Dude, that has GOT TO GO.
I never liked the text, I always sucked with it. *Shrugs* I liked the effects, but I'll un-sharpen it. =P Hao bout dis? Wait a minute.. it's not working D; Edit #4 : Mkay, can I has tutorial on Un-Sharpening? I'm not going to do the Step-Backward thing because I'm not sure how far away I sharpened it.
I'm not sure if there is any other way, but here is how I do it: Select the blur tool - set the shading (forgot what it's called...something to do with the brush's opacity) to your liking (10-15 perhaps?) - brush over the over-sharpened effect. That's how I do it, so I hope that helped...
strange focal placement, c4d goes against the flow(and isn't necessary if you have the lightning), and colors are kinda yuck to me