Ablation

I just noticed that in the second picture, I think the area around the weapon pad is too open and flat. If you want it to stay open, I would suggest maybe adding some height variation in that area to keep it from being too flat.
Good work tho, it looks like a fresh map style kinda like paintball

 

so cool, i like the yellow and green

 

Overall i feel like the map is meant for FFA, might be too small for teams. I also found some of the Spawn Points in the map to be to uniform and not scattered across the map. The map did also lack a variety of weapons. I think a sniper and more UNSC weapons would help and grenades. I like the design of the map and the added touches like the Pelican, Warthog, and Dropship in the back drop, and the dead covenant in one of the death pits. It seems to tell a bit of a story. I also like the gravity slides it gives the map an interesting flare too it and could be used to get some awesome kills.