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Discussion in 'Halo 3 Competitive Maps' started by H@lo Cr@zy, Jul 27, 2008.

  1. H@lo Cr@zy

    H@lo Cr@zy Ancient
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    Abandment

    My first post on forgehub.I hope you enjoy it.
    Basically this is just a slayer map. Alot of interlocking and other forge stuff!

    Overview
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    Power Tower
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    Turret spawn
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    To download click HERE
     
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  2. ReleasetheMonk

    ReleasetheMonk Ancient
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    Welcome to Forge Hub. Sorry, but your post is not up to standards.
     
  3. Dr. Chombie

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    welcome to forge hub. i see you haven't embeded your pictures. heres a guide that'll tell you everything
    http://www.forgehub.com/forum/custo...edding-your-screenshots-your-maps-thread.html
    it would also be nice that when you fix your post you add a description of the map.

    EDIT:i'l admit it looks like a pretty good map. definitely could get competitive, but maybe if i were you i'd flip those boxes upside down to make them look nicer but overall, 3.6/5
     
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  4. thesilencebroken

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    looks pretty awesome. it could use a little spice here and there, but all and all, it looks like a well made map. ill dl and test it out.
     
  5. stin10

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    very well done. my only critisism would be that you should've flipped the boxes. but still, great map
     
  6. Widestoned

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    wow this maps awesome! i like the creativity of the tuuret spawn instead of just puttin a random turret.
     
  7. Jump4h

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    this map looks great but could use some smoothing on the surfaces. i just see some uneven stuff, which is typically not good when it comes to floors/walkways
    7/10
     
  8. CHUCK

    CHUCK Why so serious?
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    i agree with stin(next time put reasoning behind your criticisms), walking on the flat bottom of a double box feels better than the ugly top and it would give a smoother feel to the map when walking from box to bridge to box. It doesn't look as challenging to make as other maps out there but i like the simplicity of this.

    I really like the crisp feel to this entire map, the geomerging and interlocking look nice. I dont know how it plays but it looks pretty. lol. It's a good first map post, perhaps i'll do a forge through.
     
  9. philthyphillup

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    It looks pretty good, and you being new just makes me think all the better. Hope you enjoy your stay and dont listen to all these other naysayers.
     
  10. H@lo Cr@zy

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    Thanks Phillup
     
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  11. Orphanslayer92

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    This map has great interlocking and merging. The surfaces look smooth and the overall design is good. Excellent map.
     
  12. FreakyPenguin5

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    looks pretty god nice job
     
  13. Murdock Sampson

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    Wow i really like the design. and someone's been brushing up on their advanced forge techniques... 9/10 its really great.
     
  14. Y35 <3

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    nice job for your first map
    like the geo merging, tiz ub2r
    4/5
    its a good map, i wont DL i have many like this
     
  15. H@lo Cr@zy

    H@lo Cr@zy Ancient
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    Plz comment
     
  16. Metallic Snake

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    wow, when did this map come up, 3 days ago? your geomerging is fantastic, and the structures look interesting and new, ill deffinetly download it, come back with feedback maybe.
     
  17. Nobody Worthy

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    For a first post, not bad. I really am liking this layout you have here. A few spots look like they could be improved, but I could be wrong. (I'll look around and get back to you) ~Also I think it might be escapable... I'll try that too and tell you if it is or not.
     
  18. IDave the Rave

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    looks cool ill dl but next time flip the boxes
     
  19. xFr1ct10nx

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    great map you made. And because your new and this is your first map and you already know how to interlock and merge w/ the map geometry makes you seem alot better i think. I have a feeling that your going to be a very good map maker.
     

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