Not as good as your first. Try not to render images yourself, just find one on planetrenders.net. Or use stocks. Follow some tutorials on the basics: flow, depth, lighting etc. And join some GFX sites, you'll find some good tutorials on GFX sites. Anyway, the render is blurry, work on blending, you need a light source and some lighting, those random black bits don't fit and the text is quite difficult to read.