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  1. Mace

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    Loosely followed a tut for the first. 'twas for PS
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  2. Lord Terrax XII

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    They do not earn a spot in mai fave five... They aren't bad but nothing spectacular can be said about them... Prefer the second because the C4d is more blended... On the first one it seems out of place. Also wrong color people on #1. U need to start trying to incorporate more filters and such. All your work is good but you could be better w/ filters.
     
  3. KratosAurion777

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    I think that in #1 the people disappear too suddenly; they look like they should fade softly into the background. I agree with Terrax, the C4D is a bit out of place in the first one as well.

    The second one is very nice, the person blends very well and the effects and smudging are very well done. I would say that the font could be a bit better, but it really doesn't matter very much. Nice work on this one.
     
  4. Mace

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    Dont care.
    I don't think its out of place.
    No, not really. Its a brown/red color scheme, and I think red fits in that scheme.

    Nah, I don't think so.

    Didn't look right.

    Not really.

    thank you gud sir.
    Thank you gud sir.
     
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  5. Zanitor

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    These look pretty good, first one seemed a bit over smudged, but I see the effects you was going for looks nice. The second one, the hand looks kinda awkward to me, but yet you done a great job it turned out well, I like the style.
     
  6. Mace

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    The renders body pose is kinda wierd, yeah.
     
  7. Draxfear

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    Mace, if your gunna reject every negative comment about the sigs, why bother CnCing?
    Though I suppose Terrax could have said something nice about them, yes.

    Anyway, i like the text in the first, but i think the colours in the smudged areas are a bit dull and could be better if they where brighter warm colours. Should sharpen the spartans up a bit too.
    The second one's blending and depth is really good. The colours are betterbut i thibk it could do with a border.
     
  8. Icecikle

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    well, that just looks odd to me...His gun randomly cuts off, and their just....well there, just looks odd to have them sitting there like that. The c4d seems out of place, although the text is okay.

    I like the text in the first one better....The smuding and blending are much better in this one. But I don't like how her/his sword is cloudy. I also don't like the dark spot in the corner. the arm is nice and the bg is ok.
     
  9. Mace

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    Thanks for teh CNC
    She has boobs, and that dark part is part of her 'getup'
     
  10. Icecikle

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    yeah, but its just kinda stuck out there, not connected to her, so I would remove it. But thats just me...
     
  11. Frag Man

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    I'm confused.
     
  12. Draxfear

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    confused.com?

    I agree with Ice, it isn't very clear where it goes so it doesn't look right being part of the sig. A simple adjustment luckily :)
     

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