It looks way too oversharpened.
Well that's too ****ing bad for you. You said I couldn't make one, yet I have. So that's like saying; "Frag can't make a good anime signature."
What the fu- DON'T DECIDE THINGS BY YOURSELF! [spoiler]
Seriously, obsession is taking it a bit far.
The more I look at it.
What the... who are you?
http://www.forgehub.com/forum/graphics-arts/57369-signature-school-22.html#post778550
You forgot to mention you will piss your pants. Anyhow, it's not messed up. In fact, this is rather a great set-up. I think the manga is much...
You blurred the background too much.
Blend the foreground with the background.
Who says you can't paint in photoshop?
That's more like a style than problem.
Oh nothing.
This is a step towards that. Much like signature making, you have to learn how to blend colors.
You actually go more than one place.
Does it have to be? A painting and this signature have a lot in common. They're both art, and they both have colors.
Hmm. Interesting.
Because one might say a painting has two focals.
NO! It hurts my eyes! I don't think a signature is supposed to hurt your eyes. It's like; Oh, heres a focal. Oh, heres a focal. Oh, here's a...
It's better, but like I said, I keep looking back and forth when I see it.