I actually kinda like the scanlines in this one...at least they aren't everywhere and they go with the flow.
Oh snap, sorry bout that. Yest thats better, I think the render could still use a little blending though.
Remove the line between the Kill and Tiger and move it closer to the dude. The faded flag or whatever on the side needs to be removed, you need to...
Its the way that it just kinda comes off and stops. It looks kinda like a motion blur to me, and it doesn't help anything. try turning the jitter...
C4ds didn't help this any, pick less solid ones. The smuding is better, but I still don't like the left hand, my left. The text well, lets remove...
night.
k. cya when you want to try your luck again.
I laughed...the first time I saw it. but I guess its only half a point. your back to one.
you still have half a point....I'll give you the .5 back if you can do something subtle. Or make me laugh.
past the render in multiple times, and make sure it has flow. That way, it has the color of the render, because you pasted it more than once, and...