SargeantSarcasm

Wrong show?

Um....I was thinking oatmeal....

Why does that kid get a prize? I want one.

Da-yam!

Sounds great, at first it didnt make a whole lot of sense then it did, it sounds really great. As for now the story and plot seem perfect, anything I could suggest probably wouldnt be benefitial to it. As long as everything is is constructed and written and explained right I have very high hopes for it.

Um... only tip. Probably because I suck at keeping track of who's who(even in some movies, except for batman). So just make sure everyone is very impacting and memorable.
But yeah, it sounds great.

I apoligize I took so long.
Thursday night I was barely at the computer, had a dentist appointment then had to see a god awful play for school... that was 3 of the longest hours of my life.


ANyway, I just finished reading #1. I dont feel there's much or anything to critisize. The plot seems filled with holes that get filled in as the story progresses. Which is what I think you were going for. I'll read pt 2 now and come back.

Alright, so whenever you want to we can work on it. I have school between 7:00 and around 3:00 though. (Central time)

I dont mind, I try to make things as perfect as possible. Ill send you a FR as soon as I get done with this game im in.

Yeah, I make them. He is hopefully going to help me, and I would LOVE to have you help out to.

Hey, I was just wondering...would you like to help me with my new skate park?

sargent can you give people recon for something which is really good cause my firend has made a map on avalanch which is really and i mean REALLY good

oh lmao. okay xD

Why is Sexy Dude, spamming your profile?

have a good day at school

i hope you have a good time at school what job do you want when you get older

never

wait so why you online on the computer now

hey sarge can you get online please i want you to test my new map PLEASE

hey man can you come and play a game with me on halo on my new map cause i want to know what people think of it

I have a dentist appointment in 10 minutes. I'll get to reading that as soon as I get back. Cant wait to.

idk when because im still working on it but ill let you know when i am done with the map