Dax

The map looks loads better

thats iffy, my time on Xbox is spotty at best (I am kept rather busy) but, I'll PM you again if I can.

Only if they are having trouble figuring it out, in which case I have a article I can send them to try to help first.

Thanks for the compliment on Jinx (now Mojo)! :D

All fine now, might have been a glitch.

thanks bro!

Sure, we need new members badly. I think I might put together a lobby to just help explain it to new members.

Yep, it looks and plays much better than it originally did. The aesthetics are cleaner and weapon set works better than I expected. I don't remember correctly, but is there a teleporter leading from the healthpack to the needler? I think that would be a nice addition. Also, I think you should turn that 2x4 ramp into a landing and such.

If you want, you could write the feedback for Dive :) You can show it to me before you post and I'll write whatever you missed. Sort of like a co-feedback, haha.

Just finished the current crop, but that would be great if you could help me out with the ones in the future.

Thanks.

just posted v4 to the thread

so ive got the recording of v4 at home. i just need to edit in the title and ur name. and my gay lil intro WHOOOO!

lol im glad u like the music. ill set up another one. is v4 on ur fileshare?

just posted the video walkthrough to rainbow city
let me know if theres any changes to be made
ttyl

Hi youre cool, add me on LIVE? Shikarex

srry. its been kinda hectic at home. im working tomorrow and saturday so i can get on tonight or sunday. im in the eastern time zone so its about 9PM here atm

Sorry about yesterday. There was too much going on at once, haha.

Nah, I mean I like your signature.

And thanks, haha.

I like your signature.

The forging was very clean, but not aesthetically pleasing. This is primarily because of inconsistant object usage, overlapping objects, and the use of ugly objects. Unfortunatly, some people judges maps on looks alone, so I recommend cleaning it up a bit.

I recommend moving the sniper to the center, removing the spartan laser, and replacing the focus rifle with a more suitable weapon to counter the grenade launcher. You might also want to put it in a more obvious location that is still somewhere near blue spawn. This way, each team with have a designated weapon and there will be another one centrally located. Of course, it's your choice though.

Another thing that I forgot to add is the LoS in the sniper hall. It isn't a problem if the sniper is there, but if you do decide to move it then you might have to find a way to shorten the sightline. Don't quote me on that though.

If you need any help, invite me to a game.

haha, I played horribly. I apoligize for not talking about the map itself much, but there really weren't too many problems with it. The forging could be better, but I for one could care less about what it looks like.