SargeantSarcasm

lol sarge you are too beast of a person, i see why u run the place lol.

First nice (..) filler there.

Ok well this is a two part question.
First do you mind if i attempt to remake the minigame of the minotaur in Halo Reach. It was an awesome map and i feel that the TGIF i'm gunna be in could use a taste of the greatness of old FH.
Second, if yes.....would you like to help?

ok sarge question for you because TDF is no longer here.

Well well well hello there sarge.

I enjoyed it. I would like to see more indication of who is speaking. It's difficult to follow at times between what's actually being said and who's speaking, whether it's the waiter, the girl, you, or the inner monologue. I think the abrupt nature of the writing compliments the nature of conversation and it's interesting to see where your mind jumps too. However, I would like to see some breaks in the conversation to allow the reader to catchup on what's happening. Also, I think the end is a little weak. It leaves me thinking that the story is about the banter within your head, but I think the story has more potential if it's reflective of the nervousness during a date. It's doing that, but without a concrete ending or rather one that concludes the date with the girl and guy. It has a strong opening though.

EDIT: Not UDK, gamemaker

I'll read it when you send it to me. I'm working on different tutorials and playing ace of spades, it's a lot of fun.

I could've sworn Journo's could sticky threads...Guess I was wrong.
Sorry for the mistake.

Think you could sticky this thread?
Unsticky this one too plox

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meanie!

Uh...uh hoping for the best.

No answer, left a message. ::fingers crossed::

Not probotype, prototype. Yea, it should be a spectacular fail.

I'm working on a prototype. We'll see how this goes.

How's the novel coming along? I'm stoked for it.

Sarge you mind doing me a favor? Could you reopen my Signature shoppe?

http://www.forgehub.com/forum/g-shops/87468-kid-2-shop.html

Appreciate it Mate!

and happy Easter too :3.

If you have after effects CS5 (or lower Im not sure) there is an effect called 'Shatter' under the 'simulation' category. Thats how I made the logo.

After Effects only. And thanks Sargeant!

Nah you shouldn't. Some people think it's pompous to use expanded vocabularies, I find it enlightening. I like learning new things.

Btw I had to look up what a mcguffin was so I could be super cool and knowledgeable in my reply.