SargeantSarcasm

You would, wouldnt you?

It was all in good fun, now how long is the ban.

i was just getting into it.


Bah.

bedtime then bandpractice then work.

demonoid has been down for days >:[

Oh yeah, still waiting on how much you need for essentials?

So I read your submission but I was too spaced out to respond due to lack of sleep at this point in time - however, I did enjoy it, and I'm sure you've been given some valuable feedback. I'm awol for the week until my internet gets installed at my new place, so good luck with it man... hope you bag a prize.

Yus, it seems to do that every so often. I managed to get that EyeTV Reporter thing to make a backup of a safe state, and when that happens I can just restore it back. I'll look over the process again tomorrow and work out exactly what I did to bodge it. When my loan comes in I'm just gonna buy it legit tbh, a lot less hassle and it isn't too expensive at the end of the day.

Lol, sorry dude, I honestly try to avoid it as a question based on...past reading incidents. But hey, you're here, others aren't :P

You're good with words and junk, does this seem fine to your keen eye?

Did you?

No, alas I forgot about it. Kinda wish I did though.

And sorry about last night, my box overheated.

Lock, for he hath not checked the stickied?

linky
I lol'd

Spilled Mountain Dew in my keyboard. The spacebar is near broken. I need to push down extra hard to do anything. That's the most recent annoyance.

I'm too annoyed to do anything else today.

Glad to help, and you're welcome dude.

I got what you where going for, but to the "normal" reader, they might loose interest during it, it need a sense of urgency. Maybe talk about alarms in the back ground, maybe expand more on group or "packs" of brutes searching for him if you get what I'm saying.

Okay good, here is some stuff I had a problem with; it seemed a bit "wordy" in some parts to me, like when he is walking down the hall in the beginning. Some parts also seemed vague to me, mostly the part where he is going form room to room during his escape. That's really all that I can think of at the moment.

just try it..

oh yea only cool kids go to bed at 9:30
goodnighttttttttttt

then go ahead with it if you want
or just like kinda go along for a minute and stop

but I think you're smart enough to find a girl who won't do that for a first date type thing


can I go to bed?

then watch the movie like you would watch a movie
just make sure your date is content too

tada! :D