I went to Venice Beach today...took so many pics specifically for you...you'll see why when I post them tomorrow.
alright, for the love of god send me a PM or something to remind me to do it... I'm going to my dad's in about half an hour and im currently getting my stuff together, but if I remember during my late-night boredom, I'll surely look it over.
I see what you mean about how you used a similar format. so you wanted help with style? as in transitions, cuts etc?
shock is god. and its ****ing HARD to alternate between the negative and positive aspects of a game... the L4D review took me a few hours of editing and cutting to make it flow well and still alternate,...and its still not as good as I had hoped. I've already begun thinking of how I'd do it for Fallout, but it'll still take me forever I think... as for your structure. I think if you grouped parts of the game, as in +/- of questing, +/- of the world, +/- of the storytelling, it would work as long as the things you talk about seem to fit together, like questing leads to exploration of the world, which means learning more about it through storytelling, etc, then it should work. i know it sounds like im trying to teach you elementary writing techniques, but im not lol. and alright.
lol. you would resort to nationality over status. dirty commoner. and the writing was good, as usual, it was just too blocky and paragraphs didnt flow together very much because of that structure (i.e. looooonnggggg walls of text) I'll look at it later, but that was my first impression from a while ago.
Excuses of a plebeian! and okay... I'll do it later today when I'm in the "destructive" mood (kidding)
lol notice how I didn't say you sucked...just said you were too new a member thus sarge spoke, and thus Pegasi had to wait : P and EVERY ****ING TIME I remember to read your review, I'm either in the shower, or at school.
blogger.com =] I've been getting into writing what comes to my mind while I am in certain moods. I love it, because it's so much more free-flow then something scripted.
Yup, exactly. I was retired, and like "grrr i want to infract that newb cuz he r spammin" but couldn't. So, screw retired, I'll hand out infractions here and there whenever possible.
You weren't there for the meme, were you? D= Anyways, how's the ol' staff forum going? Still overly-dramatic?
That's relatively surprising. I wouldn't have expected you to rape him, that bad, anyways. Damn ur foreign connection. Damn it to hell.
lawl! While I have you here, what are those lulz i was promised? >:| And life is exquisite, and complicated. You know. Later tonight, when not being pressed to get off the computer, I'd like your ideas on this.
Just letting you know I'm quoting you. Also messaging you, because you promised me lulz. I have not had them, yet. I demand them. >:|
