Looks very rough and low quality. =/ I'd say to try to find some tutorials for C4D. Otherwise just keep practicing, but don't keep spamming every C4D you make on the forum.
Spam doesnt really matter in the gfx area, no posts count anyways, Terrax, not bad for your first few, you should look for some basic tutorials, it helps, I was just taught so tutorials didn't do anything for me except for one on lighting.