CnC from Icequiem

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  1. Icecikle

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    I don't like the stuff coming out of the amp, and it doesn't seem like you did a whole bunch. But its nice and simple. I like.

    I don't like the lines coming off of her and the megaphone, the border needs to be smaller also. Another thing is that big silver thing under the megaphone doesn't look great either.

    Part of the way through his face it gets darker than the rest. The text could use some more grungyness imo too. The guy looks a little renderish too. Fix that and it will look good.

    The first one is great! But the text should change, and the rain doesn't look great, imo.

    In the second one the silver c4d should change, or blend in more. Because as is it doesn't look good the left side especially.

    The last one isn't as good as the first, but better than the second. The mountains look blurry and lq as compared to the rest. The top looks good, but its ruined by the mountains the sailboat also looks a little blurry around the edges.

    Well, the text could use some work, and I'm not a fan of the big bright blotch on the right. Another thing is the border, its to thick. Other than that its very nice.
     
  2. loshon

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    I don't even have a 360, but I have to say, the ODST theme is pretty cool.
     
  3. Randle Scandal

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    anybody is fine, if not both.
     
  4. J4M NUTST3R

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    Stupid black Crayola pencil.
     
  6. HellsRequiemAMX

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    You should add a light source, and do more effects rather than just putting C4D's on a canvas, also text could use a lot of work.

    Nice work randall, next step I would say is adding a lot more detail, looks nice now though, just if you want, more detail would look a lot better.

    Nice wokr J4M, maybe add more effects to the left side, and play around with the text a bit more.


    Someone got bored during their banned time lol...

    Should make your shadow on the ground a lot stronger, since the intensity of the light is really bright. Add more details in my opinion, overall nice work. I like seeing art that isn't in Photoshop.
     
  7. Frag Man

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    Yea. You could say 10 hours of straight up work.
     
  8. HellsRequiemAMX

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    Lol, nice, you should work more into abstract, or get into detail a lot more.
     
  9. loshon

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    Ice's tutorials have convinced me that clipping masks are the way to go.
    Also, I'm scrapping that last one because I don't like it anymore!
     
  10. HellsRequiemAMX

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    Wow, the top one is nice, love the colours, the effectrs, the light, the text, very nice work loshon. The second is not as good in my opinion, it needs more depth and the text isn't really all that appealing to me, nice effects though.
     
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  12. Icecikle

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    Looks nice. However, the canvas size sucks and the text could use some work. Everything else, blending, flow is good. colors are great.
     
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  14. HellsRequiemAMX

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    right side is really empty, the effects seem a bit repetitive, flow is nice, lighting could use lots of work, and it seems too bright, add some shadows.
     
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    From a tut. Gimp.
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  17. HellsRequiemAMX

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    Pretty nice effects but you should fix up your lighting and change the border, text could use some work too, and the render looks a tad lq :/.


    Pretty cool design, maybe add colour for fun? Other than that it's really cool.
     
  18. MeNaCe x TIGER

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    I had to redo the whole thing cause I never saved it in .xcf D:
    Well, I dunno if it looks better this way, but more color!

    And, what about this one:
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    First sig in 1 1/2 months.

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    V2. (Sharpened)
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    EDIT: Damn, it looks extremely LQ now...
     
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  20. loshon

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    GIMP.

    Yay! 1000th post! Congrats, guys, this is a great service.
     

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