Dubbed Cloud Runners, begins at the line "Run with me" Run with me Through the clouds Jump and skip across them with me This one Then this one Then this one We’ll run across the sky And we’ll never Have to land On the ground _________________________________________________________ And once again, no responses. This is getting stupid, I'm gonna stop posting my work here if this keeps up. *sigh* People.... jeeze...
people dont appreciate that it is different.. they don't know how to reply to it.. il say that i liked your "beautiful girl" one better, but i like the text placement on this one.
Because this board is graphics and arts. Not graphic arts. Get your **** straight. =3 And just for the idiots who don't appreciate literature, I've made it into a nice simple image. Enjoy.
Too hard to see in the picture ^ But I like the text placement. A lot of famous poems have you follow the words in a pattern so you get a feeling of how it's supposed to be read. Very nice.
dude, take it easy, the only way i see people posting here politely is just saying its beautiful and leaving, dont be surprised when people just come in here, read your poem, think about it for a moment and leave, dont expect too many people to become nostalgic about it and start saying you should become a famous poet and demand you to write more. I think its nice, a great poem, but i thought i just oughta say that.