Sandbox Shipwreck Falls

Discussion in 'Halo 3 Race Maps' started by MastaPayps, Aug 15, 2009.

  1. MastaPayps

    MastaPayps Ancient
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    Hello Visitor this is not a new track persay.. its actually my second one but i thought i might as well post it so people who havent played it can enjoy it.​

    Starting area
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    First bank
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    First jump
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    Second Bank
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    Second jump
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    Third bank
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    Fourth bank
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    Third jump
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    Destination straight away
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    Fifth bank
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    Ending jumps
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    Download and Enjoy!​

     
  2. Powerslave

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    great and smooth.
    yet again another great racetrack.
    the only thing is the name, why shipwreck falls.

    NO SHIP.
    NO WRECK.
    NO WATER FALL (Falls).
     
  3. MastaPayps

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    Becuase the track reminded me of a RIDE i used to ride on at Six Flags elitch gardens
    plus its a cool name
     
  4. The Stickmen

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    Looks fun and I'm queuing it for download right now. But its a little ugly. I don't think it would take more than a few hours to really clean up some spots. I bet this map is a blast to play, and i'll come back after I play it, but it would be a nicer overall package if you interlock and line up a few areas (like the wood bridges with the columns lining them). Just some constructive criticism.
     
  5. MLRR

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    Cool Race Map. I like how some of the jumps goes right over the other drivers. You got my download.
     
  6. PwnsauceAddict

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    hm this looks pretty nice and fun, but at some parts seems really boring. For example all of your banks are flat, therefore there not really banks but more turns. And at some of the straightaways you didnt interlock. Also i dont know why but that last jump just doesnt look appealing to me. Im still going to download this though and maybe give you more accurate feedback
    EDIT: hm it was just as i thought, it was forged very nice and smoothly and you did a good job with that, but at some times it was VERY boring, and it didnt make me want to keep playing it over and over again like thunder peaks. Try not to make any flat track, because that just leads to boredom
     
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  7. Benzu Akamaru

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    It's pretty smooth with some interesting turns. But why the juicy effect?? I cannot stand the way killballs look in juicy, but apparently that is a feature aesthetic in my piece. If I ever downloaded it, I'd have to take away that juicy.
     
  8. MastaPayps

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    the main reason the turns are flat is because it was early in my forging days and i didnt have a good enough technique to perform and make look nice at the same time but ive learned rom then and ive gotten better
    also i said it was my second map 2
     
  9. uF HaVoK

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    GREAT, really fantastic, the lighting is alittle weird when driving, but overall this is awesome.. Really smooth and fun, i just wish there was enough supplies for some more barriers along the edge, looks alittle bad since almost all of it is open to fall off
     
  10. Mongoose

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    A pretty good map all in all. Smooth turns and solid forging. However, at the end, it looks like you slacked off. The loop to start transition is terrible, and often I lost all control after coming off of the wood bridges. Other than that, a great map.
     

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