WINDINGROAD No this is not a remake of a mario cart track if there is one oh well that name is knocking around in my head i dunno. Well this is my third track released its got banking interlocking very smooth and pretty cheatproof.here are t3h screeenies..Oh and if someone can tell me how to put a poll would be thanked. because i don't see the option URL="http://haloscreenshots.net/gallery/58BBD79B0825356150FCA308AF902687/"][/URL] the fencewalls appear in 30 seconds giving people time to prep also the barriers cannot be moved due to teleporters behind them. the first banked turn incredibly smooth the second banked turn also smooth seems like you are going down and up at the same time i dunno its hard too explain the third and final banked turn also smooth a sheild door bounce im going to try to fix this because you lose alot of speed on it the finish line and the path leading to the start DOWNLOADHERE
The map looks pretty good, but one thing you may want to do is make the fence walls spawn in 20 or mabye even 10 seconds. I don't know if it is just me, but thirty seconds seems like too much time for prep.
You have decent forging next to crappy forging altogether in the same pictures. For one: Why is the third fencewall turned opposite? For two: You have semi-clean bank turns but the movable objects are placed horribly. There, that's it. This is no better than ordinary, and it's on Foundry! Unless you're a VERY good forger you probably shouldn't still be messing around with Foundry.
It looks fine, but the end where the dumpsters are put looks like it was just slopped together, did you not have enough money/items?
wow, thats taking critisism a little to seriously. the map is both well made and thrown together at the same time. the turns and miraculassly well made but then you seem to have cut corners on some parts, like you rushed to reach an imaginary deadline. my advice i s to take the extra time to 100% complete a map to its fullest potentiol before posting. sure it takes longer, but you will get alot more downloads in the future because of it. good luck on future projects, unless you were serious about quiting because of quote "a asshole named benzue or sumthing"
You seriously need to be able to accept constructive criticism if you even think about posting a map on ForgeHub. You're being the "asshole," not him. I agree with every one of the points he made, especially the fact that you shouldn't be forging on Foundry unless you really know what you're doing. Looking at a map with mediocre forging smacked together with the least-possible-eye-pleasing pile of crap ever isn't going to make people give you five stars. You get 1/5 for stuff like this.
I think his map is awesome and should be applauded for being on foundry just because its a hard thing to accomplish. Oh and I like how you can diss these maps even though I haven't seen you post any maps that are within your standards.