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You should show more of the shoulders if possible. Another thing is use the clone stamp tool to get rid of that paper thing in the bg, attracts the eye to much.

 

The sign on the wall on the left is distracting.

 

loshon be correct
major flow disruptor. eraseify that goddam sign

 

Agree with the above.

Otherwise, I'd hit it.

 

Re-do it all! It'd be worth it, it's still pretty bad.

Other than that, I like this one a lot. It might be cool if the circles were clipping masks.

 

Ya u can still see it, just try some smudging or some clone stampage.

 

Beautiful indeed.
Other than that paper thing XD

Love the C4Ds you used.
How come the ones you used here aren't in that pack you sent me?

 

the left side of her hair looks weird. Nice Signature...