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  1. RackemWillie77

    RackemWillie77 Ancient
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    Hey all, I made this last night out of various stock photos.
    It needs more work, but I'm not sure what to do. Plz give input!

    V1
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    V2 (w/ blurred txt)
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    V3 (w/ newspaper bg)
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  2. Khala Warrior55

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    in the back get rid of the news print and put a mushroom nuke and shadow war in the backround.
     
  3. PeachHead00

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    Honestly, V2 looks fine to me. The blurred text gives it depth, very nice sig IMO.
     
  4. Nightfire

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    The hole looks very fake, try finding an image of a helmet with bullet penetration. Usually the hole would be a little smaller and it wouldn't be in a nice round shape.
     
  5. Knight Kninja

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    i agree with nightfire on the bullet hole.. in fact the helmet itself looks kinda fake..

    i like v2 with blurred text, but think you need to put something in the background.. the newspaper works, but if the background were of like a battlefield or like khala said, a mushroom cloud i guess(though i have a feeling it wouldnt look great)

    as for lighting and stuff, thats all great. so good job on creativity and execution
     

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