Yeah, shouldn't you add anything you make to your gallery? For Cnc, Good concept and executed pretty well. But I don't like the font choice.
I don't like the font choice as well. The smudging is okay, but you kinda overdid it in his torso section. Very original idea. Good job with that. Tone down the orangeness. It's too saturated.
Either you need to tone down the Dissolve layer, or blur the Noise>Pick. Or whatever that pixely smudging is. Also, make the double focal (Correct terminology?) less green and orange and a little more BnW. And, as mentioned, change the text. Consider putting it somewhere closer to the focal and changing the font. Looks pretty cool as is, but the details are a bit off.