What the **** did you do to his eye? Also, you could of made the stroke effect a little better, use the pen tool and draw ovals around the areas, the way you did it kind of distracts from the focal.
Remove the blue crap. Other than that I love how he fades into the background with that Noise>Pick. His face looks messed, but oh well. With the blue lines: bad sig. Without the blue lines: good sig.
I like it much more now, except for that his lip looks like it just got speared by an ice sickle or something.