Yuk. Sorry, but there are lotsa things wrong with this... and I can't say all that much that is nice. =P 1. Don't do the split sig thing unless you have a really good idea... and if you do, don't add a border around the parts. 2. Don't EVER make it so that a focal is obscured. 3. Make the text shorter, a cleaner font, and make it so that it blends more. 4. Don't layer on filters ESPECIALLY on the focal (Marcus). Not much else I can say but... start over. lol