No Fail. Gears is not colorfull and it should not be colorfull. And also the scanlines are to seeable.
You also used an ancient image of Mr. Fenix. Seriously, that render was probably drawn by a dinosaur or something. I like effects around his shoulders, and the text placement is spot on IMO. I do agree that it is too colourful, at least keep it in the COG blues. The render doesn't blend with the right so well because of that.