I plan on putting more frames in but they were just screenshots i took, i might take a few screenies from a game i played were a whole team (8 people) turned around to shoot me on a mongoose when three people on my team were right in front of them BRing them.
Maybe take the chopper out, I find it harder to understand when that is in there. And dont move the camera angle. Keep it fixed. It took me a while to figure out that it was the purple guy that lasered him. But its a pretty funny idea. EDIT: Yes, I like the speed of the third one the best.