I dunno, I love it. The sparkle thing on him is definitely over sharpened, but I really like the colors and the text. Which looks a little trippy, by the way. the green circles don't go super well, but the cirles on the right look very good. Great blending and okay smudging.
I like it. It has good depth and flow .imo. But try removing that yellowish/whiteish curve to "his" right.
Yea the yellowish curve on the right takes away your attention from the focal, but everything else except the text is truly superb, good job.