Too sparkly. And there really is no depth or focal, that I can tell, even with the guys on the sides of him. They may be too blurred. Anyways, the sparkle flowy shiz almost goes against the flow of the render, well, actually, it does. A lot. Not your best. Improve the flow and make a focal, then I may like it...
I actually like the color of this sig, though i do agree that the other guys in the sig are alittle to blurry and theat there little depth in the sig but everything else is truly superb.
I like it. The colors do go well, I don't understand what others are saying. Blending is good, but I feel that the effects overlap the stock too much. Cole and Dom should come through a bit more so you can have better depth. Also, I can see the focal, once again I don't get what people are saying. Lastly, work a bit on the flow, it looks like it's going from bottom right to top left, but it needs to be determined a bit more. Either or, good work from you once again.