Iron Man Sig

Discussion in 'Off Topic' started by Gr4phix, Jul 22, 2009.

  1. Gr4phix

    Gr4phix Ancient
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    WARNING! Bad Text (Lol I suck with text)

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    CnC would be greatly appreciated. The main focal point is mainly his arm I wanted to add better text but Idk how ='(
     
  2. Donii

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    The render need WWWWWAAAAAAYYYY more blending.
     
  3. KratosAurion777

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    The render does need to be blended better. Also, the effects around his arm and behind him (on the render) need to be faded, and there is a little white border on the render that needs to be removed as well. Your background should be blue, as well... it would look better with this particular render (I believe he is in space or something in the original image, if you got this from PlanetRenders). I suggest the following modifications (this is just what I would do, you don't have to even read them if you don't want to...):
    - Make the background blue
    - Add a low opacity light blue C4D set to "Screen" behind his hand, and use a Radial Blur set to "Zoom" on it.
    - Feather the edge of the render (Especially the light effects coming from his hand).
    - Use the burn tool to remove the lighting on Iron Man's back, and darken the edges of the sig.
    - Use the dodge tool to intensify the light coming from his hand.
    - Use the blur tool to blur everything other than Iron Man's hand, if you want that to be the focal.

    Overall, I think that this is a good starting point, and with more work on this sig it could turn out to be very good. Overall, a nice job.

    Also, I apologize if I seem to be picky, but I do really like this sig and I would like to see what you can do with it. Once again, good job.
     
  4. Draxfear

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    I think that text is awesome, got some real nice texture on it :)
    If I was gunna inprove this sig, I would get rid of the jagidy edges on the render with the blur tool. Make the text bigger a bit. Show more C4D and blend it better with the bg and put a copy in front of the hand and erase bits i dont want. Alnd lastly move everything over to the left a bit so there isn't so much blank space. Infact, give me the file i wanna have a go now lol
     

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