First Vertical

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  1. Juggernaut

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    Focused on color and mostly depth. Once again, real CnC, no bullshit.
     
  2. M.Jelleh

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    This **** is real. The main thing I don't like that much is the vertical bars on the left side. They are too 2d where the rest of the sig seems very 3d. Other small things are that she seems a bit overcontrasted and there seems to be some sort of blue aura around her. But this is a fantastic concept sig and a great working point. Fantastic c4ds btw.
     
  3. Frag Man

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    I hate how some objects are blurry, and some are sharp. None of them represent a good focal either. They mostly distract from it.
     
  4. Juggernaut

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    Depth. Also I failed to say it's a duel focal between the girl and C4D.

    Also to the other post, thanks. I fixed the contrast on the face, but I'm not going to post it.
     
  5. M.Jelleh

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    The other post? That's Master-****ing-jelly's post. Didn't your parents teach you any respect? lol jkjk
     
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    From the git-go you are drawn from bottom to top and outward to inward following what was created as a linear procession of semi-3-dimensional objects turns into a bustling metropolis of personal perspective combined with tasteful finish that someone awaits to guide you through this labyrinth. On first glance, it sparks creativity and a range of emotion with an almost pertinent taste of the memories ever so distant that lap at the buds comfort and relaxation and warmth and togetherness. How this piece could not upon further inspection cease to amaze would be a spectacle fitting of the amazement of the Christ, himself. It's breathtaking, slenderly designed simplicity alludes to a complexity not found within many artistic renderings of the soul.

    I give it a 6/10.
     
  7. Juggernaut

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    Fix'd.

    But uh, okay I don't know if that was really helpful, but sure, soul and stuff, cool.
     
  8. Nitrous

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    It's social satire.
     
  9. EGP

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    These are the moments where I wish I was smart enough to understand a tiny bit of what he just typed up. Anyway, I see how you put some work into getting the focal right, but it seems like her head is popping out a bit too much. The c4d kind of distracts the whole theme of the signature. I see pink light blue and yellow as the main colors of this signature. A red c4d doesn't seem to fit very well.
     

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