Arbitar

You need way smaller text closer to the focal, A Visible Focal, Dont brush over it, And waaaaay more blending..

 

You spelled Arbiter wrong...

 

Flow is stupid.

Blending?

Colors: BORING.

Text: to far. to big

 

Give him a fkin break kid. Can't you tell its his first?

 

And what happens if the colors are boring, they are almost black and white and black and white sigs are not boring.

So what if the text is to big or to far away from the focal. Its not like a universal law to place small text right next to the focal.

 

Actually, yes it is. Otherwise you f*ck up the focal.

 

i would add some more stuff to the background and erase the stuff on the arbiter
and its a good start it is way better than my first lol