Gift to me

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  1. Shedo

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    Made by Mallet a way while back.. Tell me what you think of it.
     
  2. RaBBiiTTT

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    Needs more blending. The effects don't appeal to me as well. Text is okay.
     
  3. Shedo

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    Nothing I can really do about that.. but thank you for the comment.
     
  4. Frag Man

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    Dun dun dun, do do do, PPPRubba pruba pruba Our house!

    In the middle street!

    Colors don't match.
     
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  5. Shedo

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    My thoughts exactly. But in all seriousness, what do you think Frag.
     
  6. loshon

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    Tis cool, but it looks very busy, not enough contrast, and just a wee bit boring. The "double focal" thingy it distracting as well, mostly because it's not the focal that's doubled

    It's okay.
     
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  7. KratosAurion777

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    I know you can't really change it at this point, but here are a few things that catch my eye:
    The teal and blue don't work very well together or match the spartan, in my opinion. The effects on the sides are a bit weird and cluttered. The font needs to be changed. The lighting is out-of-place. Overall, a bit on the bland side, just not very exciting.
     

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