I like the effects, but not their color. The text could use some improvement as well. It's too plain and yellow just doesn't look good here. What this sig really needs right now is some lighting. Put some.
Focal is actually okay for me. Although, it would be better if it was changed to something with more movement to it. I don't know. It's your sig so you decide. But what it does need is some lighting and better text. Make a v2.
I am.. Yeah the focal is fine imo. But for lighting it does have some right next to his head on each side. But ill try to add some more. v2 up
The effects look cool, but way over sharpened, as well as the stock. As stated, needs lighting and more depth. (Presumably) Good smudging.