Flare

Effects on the left distract too much from the focal. It's like you want me to look at her ear.

 

I see ur really improving with ur sigs but it wat frag is saying is ture. Try to add more effest around the focal to make it stand out more from the rest of the sig but everything your did was near perfect except the text which is alittle too small.

Overall Good job and keep up the improvement.

 

Sig looks great, besides what Frag said. The focal is just wrong. Lighting is excellent though. Good job on text. Your really improving.

 

Its a lot better. The focal is more on her face now. Good job

 

Looks good, except for the colors... they're... off.

 

HATING that like burn effect on da right. also, i think the C4Ds, while creating good flow, look ugly.

 

God this is hard to look at. I keep trying to look at the focal, but my eyes wonder to the multiple effects on the left of the focal. thats not good...

Anyways, i think you went overboard with the effects, or just didn't bother with blurring and sharpening.

 

I really like the effects especially on the left of her face. Great lighting. Nice text in there as well. You are REALLY improving.

I don't like the border though. I think widescreen would look amazing.