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First of all, great depth, as always . I love the text, and nice use of effects as well. One thing bugging me is the lighting: the Background is incredibly bright, whereas the focal (which is closer to the light source) is darker. try darkening the background a tad, I think it will look better.

 

thats pretty cool but a little less bloom on the airplane though see how that turns out

 

I'm no graphics expert to be honest, but in my opinion, the small red blotch on the tail of the front plane is distracting from the main plane. Maybe tone that down a little bit so it's still there, but you don't get distracted by it.

 

hmm. I see what you mean. Is it a stock or a render on top of a BG?

 

OK. Try a dark gradient map or photo filter over the stock but under the render and see if that helps. Mess with the layer settings and opacity as well. If it doesn't look any better leave it as it is, it's good either way

 

I like what you have, but let's add more pale colors. Try a very pale red for the effects.

 

That looks much better. Nice job.

 

Nah, I meant having both red and tan pale effects. My bad.

 

The pink streak lines throws it off, but yes, in my opinion it is bette.