My first forum signature

Discussion in 'Off Topic' started by ZombieBiscuit, Jul 7, 2009.

  1. ZombieBiscuit

    ZombieBiscuit Ancient
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    This is my first forum signature. (In my signature) It is also pretty much the only PROPER photshop ive done(aka spending time on it).

    Can you guys just tell me what you like and what i can improve on. I think its good for my first go but i know i can do way better more. The major part i want help on is the text, as i have no idea how to make text sort of blend and look good on it.

    The picture is in my sig.
     
  2. Lord Terrax XII

    Lord Terrax XII Ancient
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    1) Make it less violet...
    2) The girl loses all hotness that she may have had when you make here washed our and almost vectored looking.
    3) The hair is more of a focal than the girl...
    4) I like what you have going but why are the edges swirly and the inside is crisper? It's contradictory.
    5) Although it's the same colors the blending still isn't there... Idk specifically but it's not.
    6) Flow would be nice.
    7) Although it's weird I like the red behind her head... Doesn't work w/ the sig though.
    8) The border is not interesting and could use something more than just a rectangular marquee with a 3-5 pixel stroke.
    9) Text is bad... Needs to be closer to the focal.
    10) Once again... Too violet. It loses its... spark, when it is monotone like this.

    Not bad for a first but there's definetly room to improve.
     
  3. ZombieBiscuit

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    1. Yeah i was thinking it was definatly to violent. (im going to re do it over and over just to get some improvement.
    2. I should have made the entire girl more focal too.
    3. Like what i said for 2
    4. Like i said first time really, getting better though.
    5. I dont know what you mean by this
    6. Can you explain more on this?
    7. I really like that bit but could you explain as to why you think it does not work?
    8. Yeah i really have no idea what to do with borders. I have some cool ideas but have no clue how to do them. Ill have to learn. IF i can find a tutorial.
    9. Like i said i am seriously incredibly bad at text.
    10. Can you explain more on this, i dont understand?

    Im really a noob at photoshop so yeah.
     

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