I like this better than my last, but i over sharpened and i can find a good stock...I dont even like this one... v2 v3
The render looks very low-quality. The face looks really blurry, even though you sharpened it. The background color is odd... like a murky mustard yellow. The C4D is very boring, and doesn't add much to the sig. There isn't very much flow, either. Needs improvement.