Sniper

Its decent but it could use a better pose or maybe slightly better lighting.

 

It seems too dark to me.

 

Its decent.......but you cant really see whats goin on

If you had olde timey on take it off

But nice first try

 

Too dark indeed.
And the reloading pose has got to go. Make him have a more epic stance.

The smoke at the back is okay though, but could have been more widespread.

 

nice try adding in other effects

 

decent, and i feel like im repeating everybody
But yes, try to incorporate some more lighting and it will be good.

 

Its too dark IMO.
Nice looking bg though.

 

Kind of generic, and a bit to dark.